![]() ![]() (To the point I had 10 She’s in a row on numerous pages.)Įntire scenes were repeated (such as her bicep being grabbed and her saying ‘you’re hurting me’ happened at least 2 times within the first maybe 40 pages. On top of that there was so many examples of paragraphs where every last sentence started with the same word. Run.’ It got to the point where I physically threw the book (and I never so much as break a spine on a book.) Things were constantly phrased in threes eg ‘A reminder. ![]() This was not minor issues: there was repetition on almost every page. ✖️I’ll start with grammar and wording then move on to problematic content (racism & kink content) and likenesses to existing works.✖️Įverything felt entirely haphazard. I really hate to say that I wanted to DNF this by page 10, and only finished it so that I could share my thoughts. The quotes shared seemed well written as did the general tone of the story. On the surface it’s everything I wanted from a sapphic YA book. Let me start by saying I’ve followed the author as she wrote this on TT and really had high hopes. ![]()
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